I'm going to re-post what I gave to you as the first response on Nov 8 to your original seeking-of-opinions, and I'm so glad you went for the 'Mode2' script and style.
Great that you've actually done it!icarusinbound wrote:I'd tend to agree that the second 'NPR'-style version reads better than the very shock-jock first one. It's a lot of information to successfully convey to a potentially totally-unprepared audience. The sequenced bullet points of the second draft help support that intention more effectively.
I always feel that the constructive shock value in summarising the Official Narrative, so as to let it stand in all it's implausible glory, is such an effective action in being able to wake-up many passive consumers of the 9/11 drip-fed anthem. You've covered that angle here too, I reckon, but the strength in using that specific perspective cannot be underestimated (ie the collected recitation of individually-accepted 'truths' acting like a catalytic conjunction, the combination codes on the locked safe are so near to clicking into a fingersnap of wakefulness).
May I ask if this will be a syndicated radio show, or a local as just a town/campus, and will it be streamed? Apologies, you may not wish to say. But, seriously, well-done, it's on the button.
But excellent primer pieces, both.